This is the day it all comes together. Over the last 24 lessons you've audited your values, aptitudes, achievements, interests, skillset and the feedback others gave you. Today you're applying all of that: you'll write the first full draft of your personal statement, the piece of work that becomes ALT 1. It won't be perfect, and it isn't meant to be. Your job today is simply to get a complete draft down on the page that you can shape over the next five lessons.
Remind the class that this is where ALT 1 formally starts producing evidence. Reassure anyone anxious that this is a first draft, not the final version. They get five more lessons to refine it.
Quick check: every student should have S1.1/ALT1_source_material.md from Lesson 24 in front of them. This is the single combined file that gathers all five sections (values, skills, achievements, interests, feedback). Anyone who is missing it can rebuild a quick bullet list of their key portfolio files before starting the activity.
Three terms to hold in mind as you draft. A personal statement is not a life story and it is not a CV. It's a focused, evidenced picture of who you are and where you're heading.
| Term | What it means for you | Real example |
|---|---|---|
| Draft — a first working version you expect to revise. | Today's goal is a complete draft, not a polished one. Getting all four paragraphs down matters more than perfect wording. | The 300 to 500 word version you'll refine across Lessons 26 to 30 |
| Structure — the order your ideas are laid out in. | You'll use a four-paragraph structure so a reader can follow you and so nothing important gets left out. | Who I am / What I'm good at / What I'm interested in / Where I'm going |
| Personal statement — a concise reflective overview of you as a person for a specific opportunity. | This is the ALT 1 artefact you'll carry and revisit as your LCW portfolio develops. | A statement supporting a CAO course or apprenticeship application |
Keep this brief. The load-bearing term is draft. Head off perfectionism before it stalls anyone in the activity.
Before you write your own, read Aoife's personal statement below and study how she uses the four-paragraph structure. Notice how each paragraph does one clear job, and how she backs claims with specific evidence rather than vague words. You'll write your own straight after this.
Walk the class through beats 1 to 6 in order on the IWB using Next. Pause on each beat and ask the class to spot why the phrase works before you reveal the explanation.
The key move to name repeatedly is evidence over adjectives: Aoife never just says she is hardworking, she shows it. This is exactly what students will be judged on when they draft their own next.
Now it's your turn. Using your source material from Lesson 24 and the four-paragraph structure you just saw, write your own first full draft. Aim for 300 to 500 words. This is your first piece of ALT 1 evidence, so write it as you, honest and specific.
Circulate as students draft. The two most common stalls are (1) writing a CV list instead of reflective prose, and (2) vague adjectives with no evidence. When you see either, point the student back to a specific section of their source-material file (achievements, strong-skills evidence, feedback) and ask 'what's your proof for that?'
Anyone who finishes early moves straight to Take It Further. Do not let them idle. Anyone struggling to start can draft the four paragraph headings first, then fill one sentence under each.
This is the formal start of ALT 1 producing evidence. By the end of the lesson every student must have a complete draft saved, however rough.
Take a moment to look back at the draft you just wrote. Discuss these with the person beside you, or think them through quietly. You do not type anything here. If you want to keep a thought, add it to your Digital Portfolio in your own time.
Run this as a 90-second paired share, then take two or three voices from the room. The hardest paragraph is very often paragraph 1 (identity) or paragraph 4 (direction). Naming that out loud reassures students it's normal.
Reflection is display-only. Students add a portfolio note in their own time if they wish. They do not type on the page.
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