Life, Community & Work
Intermediate
60 mins
Teacher/Student led
+80 XP
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Drafting Your First Personal Statement

Write your first full personal statement draft using a clear four-paragraph structure and evidence from your previous work. You'll produce a 300–500 word first draft that becomes your ALT 1 portfolio evidence.

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    1 - Getting Started ~5 mins

    This is the day it all comes together. Over the last 24 lessons you've audited your values, aptitudes, achievements, interests, skillset and the feedback others gave you. Today you're applying all of that: you'll write the first full draft of your personal statement, the piece of work that becomes ALT 1. It won't be perfect, and it isn't meant to be. Your job today is simply to get a complete draft down on the page that you can shape over the next five lessons.

    2 - Key Terms ~5 mins

    Three terms to hold in mind as you draft. A personal statement is not a life story and it is not a CV. It's a focused, evidenced picture of who you are and where you're heading.

    TermWhat it means for youReal example
    Draft — a first working version you expect to revise.Today's goal is a complete draft, not a polished one. Getting all four paragraphs down matters more than perfect wording.The 300 to 500 word version you'll refine across Lessons 26 to 30
    Structure — the order your ideas are laid out in.You'll use a four-paragraph structure so a reader can follow you and so nothing important gets left out.Who I am / What I'm good at / What I'm interested in / Where I'm going
    Personal statement — a concise reflective overview of you as a person for a specific opportunity.This is the ALT 1 artefact you'll carry and revisit as your LCW portfolio develops.A statement supporting a CAO course or apprenticeship application

    3 - A Four Paragraph Statement, Annotated ~15 mins

    Before you write your own, read Aoife's personal statement below and study how she uses the four-paragraph structure. Notice how each paragraph does one clear job, and how she backs claims with specific evidence rather than vague words. You'll write your own straight after this.

    Personal statement: Aoife's application to a Business with Marketing course

    4 - Draft Your Personal Statement ~20 mins

    Now it's your turn. Using your source material from Lesson 24 and the four-paragraph structure you just saw, write your own first full draft. Aim for 300 to 500 words. This is your first piece of ALT 1 evidence, so write it as you, honest and specific.

    5 - Think About It ~10 mins

    Take a moment to look back at the draft you just wrote. Discuss these with the person beside you, or think them through quietly. You do not type anything here. If you want to keep a thought, add it to your Digital Portfolio in your own time.

    • Which of the four paragraphs was hardest to write, and why? Was it because you didn't have the evidence, or because you weren't sure what was true?
    • Look at your 'who I am' paragraph. Would someone who knows you well recognise you from it? If not, what's missing?
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